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A note to the reader. Quote Intro Snow - Ada & Wyatt meet in the snow Ada - flashback: Ada grows up in Monteverde Snow - Ada and Wyatt talk Kim - Kim, Wyatt's lover Wine - Ada replaces Kim Seasons - combine w/ next chapter Weeds - combine w/ preceding chapter L.A. - to be shortened? Ted - Ada dates, unsuccessfully Owen - to be cut Cheryl - to be cut Plants - Ada gets to know Owen Easter - to be cut Sarah - to be cut, or shortened Return - Wyatt reappears L.A. - to be cut Return - combine with chapter above Lawrence - Ada visits Wyatt Ultimatum - to be cut? Alaska - Ada and Owen in Alaska Hoboes - Ada has a small epiphany Begin Again - combine w/ following chapter Begin Again - combine w/ preceding chapter Thanksgiving - pregnancy Dougal - to be cut Clover - Clover is born Violation - Owen's violence Monteverde - Ada flees Monteverde - double the length; 3rd person Monteverde Return from Monteverde to Lawrence Teacher - Clover blackmails a teacher Party - Ada's happiness Julia - to be polished Gary - rewrite? cut?; 3rd person Samuel - Clover meets Samuel Running - Melody runs away Tree - Wyatt's death Visit - Ada's grief Leaving - Melody returns Julia - Gabriel, music, and Julia Dishes - goes earlier in story; fix ending; 3rd person Kitchen - Melody and Clover talk to each other Zack - Ada's death Berkeley - revise to fit at end of book Zack - Clover adopts Zack Misc. revisions not noted in comment fields |